MillennialStylez's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[MSG'Ninja's]

This shit kicks hella ass!!!!

This is a really good piece my man. There's nothing wrong with the composition of this. In fact, it looks like a very kinetic scene that only provides a snap shot of what's going on. The only complaint that I have about the pic, and it is a really small one, is Deadpool. Now with Deadpool being my tied with Spider-Man as my all time favorite comic character, I had to pay special attention to him. I notice that there is a red outline around him. Maybe you meant to do that, or maybe you didn't. It's still a really good pic though man. Keep it up.

msg2007 responds:

actually with dead pool i nottice the red out line
and i was going to move it but then got layze but then
aging I started to like the out line so

@#$ it
thanks for the review

[we'redoinetrong]

Really?

And you gave me a low score for so called copying off of the Boondocks? Please. This really isn't a very good picture and further more, you are copying from somebody else's idea. I'm not hitting you with a low score because of the copying because every good artists takes ideas from other people but you do so in a blatant manner. At least if you were going to do the tank thing you could have put more effort into this. I'm pretty sure you could do better if you really did try.

Bikou responds:

did i mention its animooted?

[Leaving for her.]

This is a little better....

This looks like you put a little more time into it but it still looks like it was rushed. Once again, your lines are inconstistent and your anatomy is a little off point. Nice work on the shadowing though. Try penciling your work first if you aren't already doing it, and then ink it. That will make your pics look a lot better.

[ZebraHeaded]

This's hawt.

The only thing that would've been better than this pic is hotdogs that shoot lasers! Lol!! Seriously though, this is a nice and simple picture and I love the contrast in the shaded and illuminated areas. This is a really cool pic and I like the style of your character design. Hella nice and original.

Nightwayfarer responds:

pizzas with plasma guns would have been even better :B
thx

[3 page]

Gooooddd....

This page is pretty good as well! When I was your age I drew a lot of my panels this way too. You should try doing panel in panel action to kind put some more pop in pages. That book I suggested the last time would really benefit you I believe. Also, I think a lot of modern day comics have at least 24 pages of story in them so it may also benefit you to go a little past 20 pages. It'll give you more space to flesh out your story. I say that because your panels are pretty good and that's good for puttin a lot of detail in the art but hopefully, if you decide you to stay at 20 pages, it won't condense your story too much. I hope that helps. A 9 for your efforts then my man!!

[The comic]

Nice start!!

I love to see other comicbook artists doing their thing. It looks like it'll turn out good. Also, you said something that is very true and is actually one my mottos about art. Every artists steals something from someone else and then twist and shape it to make it there own. Pretty much what you said though. Lol. I know a book that may benefit you in someway as well. It's called "You Can Draw Marvel Characters" by Dan Jurgens. I bought mine at Barnes & Noble. I think that it may benefit you a lot to absorb some info out of that book. But anyways, GOOD JOB HOMIE!!! Can't wait till you put some color and ink to this!!

TheOmiyan responds:

This comic is gonna take forever to make because im so lazy when it comes to sticking on one thing for a long while, but i'm not gonna stop this.

[awesome]

This's hella nice!

I'm really feeling this pic alot my man! For you to have run out of ink, you sure did finish up pretty strong. The black & white characters against a red background really make this pic pop. Also it looks like you've also been influenced by anime and created your own style. While there is nothing wrong with anime, I encourage you to keep working on your style to it can completely be your own. You're only 16 though and you have plenty of time to develop more and more. Don't let your strong potential go to waste. Bangin!!'

TheOmiyan responds:

Thanks for the review, this drawing did'nt take long . . . had no choice to finish it fast my computer wont me let finish things on paint ( dumb vista)

[War and beauty]

Another one is out the park!!

I'm feeling this one man! The detail in the armor is the shit and I'm especially feeling the background. The pic of the girl is really good but I think you spent the most time on the background and then second, ole girls armor. Now, for the constructive critisism. The first thing I'd say is that her left arm seems shorter than her sword arm. I sometimes have that problem too except I'd make one arm bigger than the other one. I gotta stop that shit! Lol! The second problem, which really isn't a problem, just more of a preference. The shading in this one seems a bit off to me. What I mean is that I probably would've made the shadowed colors darker than the lighter parts. But like I said before, that really isn't a problem, it's more of preference. So really there's only one thing wrong with this one and it doesn't detract from the overall look of the work. Nice job man. One more thing too, I just read your description for the pic and I have to say that you're background extra sick. The background is good enough to have been it's own piece.

ZeWitchKid responds:

lol hand problems, yeah
yeah probably the part im less happy about is he left arm grabbing her robe, i tried to make her a fencer with lady-like manners so she lift a part of her robe upward for preventing her to step on the clothing while duelling, its a female fencing stance actually i've seen it in old picture, but mabie due to the facing angle, i didnt got it right Oo oh well perfection does'nt exist, you can always get close but you burn before getting into it

[Kaya]

Niiicccceeee!!!!

Wow!! This one is your best! It is a very deep and detailed pic. I'm giving you a 9 for this one because I don't believe in 10s. The reason is because once you reach a 10, that's means your work was perfect. One should never think that their art is perfect because that means that there isn't any reason to improve. Keep striving for that 10 and keep improving.

Oni-kaya responds:

Thanks! you are very wise. *nods* I actually think this one has a few errors on it, but I keep working on it! :D thanks again XD

[Kaya and Serena]

I'll give you an 7 for this one.

This pic is a lot better than your head shot of the guy with purple hair. Your ink job is a lot better this time around but it I really think you could do more with this. Maybe you should take the time to complete it. This piece would have been a 9 but the lack of color and unfinished look of this piece takes away from the overall score. So I'm giving you a 7 for this one but I'm giving you a vote of 4 and I'll scout you as well because I can recognize your potential. One more thing too, I think that your work would benefit from being colored digitally too. This is a really good piece but it just doesn't seem finished to me. Keep up the good work!

Oni-kaya responds:

Yeah, mmh do you have an idea about what colors would look good for the t-shirts?